Magical You,

I held you in an awe,
Softer than the early morning dew,
Your beauty, stunning and raw.

I could lose into your eyes,
Gaze into them endlessly,
Your attraction is not a surprise,
Oh my lovely Queenie.

Hold my hand, 
I will walk with you,
With His grace, our union will be grand,
Will never let you down, I promise thou.

We would paint a beautiful picture,
Color our life vividly,
Be mine forever,
I'll be yours, till eternity.

With You, Till Eternity
P.S. This is for Her.

Eternity Eternity Reviewed by Vyankatesh on Wednesday, September 07, 2011 Rating: 5


  1. Beautiful and I absolutely love it!

  2. liked your eternity..keep on writing.

  3. This is lovely...

    love the rhyming.
    profound piece.

  4. Greetings: Glad to discover your blog and your poetry talent is profound.

    Poetry Rally week 51 is under the way, it would be a delight to have you in,

    A free verse or a poem of your choice is welcome!

    Bless your Wednesday!
    Hope to see you share.
    The Poetry Palace!