Magical You,
I held you in an awe,
Softer than the early morning dew,
Your beauty, stunning and raw.
I could lose into your eyes,
Gaze into them endlessly,
Your attraction is not a surprise,
Oh my lovely Queenie.
Hold my hand,
I will walk with you,
With His grace, our union will be grand,
Will never let you down, I promise thou.
We would paint a beautiful picture,
Color our life vividly,
Be mine forever,
I'll be yours, till eternity.
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With You, Till Eternity |
P.S. This is for Her.
Eternity
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Wednesday, September 07, 2011
Rating:
![Eternity](http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-DVvqVSVEaWs/TmelF1BS61I/AAAAAAAAB3k/pRx8MPxCQMQ/s72-c/Eternity.jpg)
Beautiful and I absolutely love it!
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines for her!
ReplyDeleteNice poetic promise!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful Vyankatesh :)
ReplyDeleteliked your eternity..keep on writing.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely...
ReplyDeletelove the rhyming.
profound piece.
Greetings: Glad to discover your blog and your poetry talent is profound.
ReplyDeletePoetry Rally week 51 is under the way, it would be a delight to have you in,
A free verse or a poem of your choice is welcome!
Bless your Wednesday!
Hope to see you share.
The Poetry Palace!
xoxox