I closed my eyes,
Lost myself in a dream,
On the far horizon, you were a sunrise,
Full of glory and style supreme.
I couldn't set a rhyme,
Felt as if I had commited a crime,
Let's meet once at lunchtime,
Could we set ourselves up for a lifetime?
Still an enigma,
Oh my charming diva,
You mesmerize me with your aura,
Both of us could make a wonderful saga.
It would be your heart, In which I could lose,
Your mind would be my shrine,
We could paint our lives with lovely hues,
Our company could be divine.
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| Lovely and Divine |
Divine
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Monday, September 19, 2011
Rating:
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Monday, September 19, 2011
Rating:
Very nice. Enjoyed reading.
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simply superb :)
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rhythym divine....
ReplyDeletenice one,
Cheers!
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Thank You everyone. Glad you loved it.!!
ReplyDelete@KP - Yes, It's for her. I forced myself to write it and spent a good 3 hours in composing it.
OMG, Vyankatesh I love this post more than any others in your blog...
ReplyDelete"I couldn't set a rhyme,
Felt as if I had commited a crime,
Let's meet once at lunchtime,
Could we set ourselves up for a lifetime?"..., very nice lines and double "likes":)