The night was breezing,
Oh dear, she wasn't forthcoming.
At a time she was my most precious,
She wasn't giving me her company gracious.
She was a charming seductress,
And an enticing temptress,
I hated to resist her,
Her allure was exceedingly demure.
She was a charming seductress,
And an enticing temptress,
I hated to resist her,
Her allure was exceedingly demure.
I closed my eyes,
Begged her to take me over,
The tinkering thoughts,
Were scaring her from coming closer.
She hadn't seen such a restless mind,
Simple yet intertwined,
Foolish and hungry,
But of what it was still in a quandary.
And then in a whiff the calm descended,
Keeping her promise she quickly ascended,
Before I knew it was already dawn,
Like the elusive pimpernel, she was already bygone.
P.S. This is for my sweet little friend - sleep herself - for whom I was hopelessly searching a few nights back.
My Elusive Friend
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Thursday, April 07, 2011
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Reviewed by Vyankatesh
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Thursday, April 07, 2011
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I am happy that I came here to your blog,your post is wonderful..
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have put up some more snaps ...
i liked how u personified "sleep". nice post.
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"And then in a whiff the calm descended,
ReplyDeleteKeeping her promise she quickly ascended,"--- This one was magical...
Nice piece of writing there...
Keep it coming!
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Thanks Rohit.
ReplyDeletelovely !! the elusive queen really sleep ..
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