She replied, "There are things that don't meet the eye. Like oxygen. They define me."
"And what are those?", was the next question.
And the answer is right below.
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Who am I?
What makes me fabled & wow?
A mystical girl that I am,
The secret would baffle thou.
For the world,
I am a femme-fatale.
For once, believe me,
I am just an ordinary gal.
Under the sky azure,
I am a blazing siren.
My principles are stronger,
Deeply rooted than a tree banyan.
In the ocean blue,
I am a precious coral.
A dame with neat virtues,
I am modest n' rational.
I am a wire live,
Standing out is my art creative.
With my magic, I hold you captive,
Driving me are thoughts pensive.
Sparkling in bright yellow,
I am a darling Venus.
Around me is a bright halo,
Powered by my energy tireless.
My looks you may applaud,
For them I am thankful to God.
My art arouses awe,
A li'l secret, I ain't without a flaw.
My looks you may applaud,
For them I am thankful to God.
My art arouses awe,
A li'l secret, I ain't without a flaw.
My dreams are countless,
The least I am is selfless.
My merits you may extol,
I am thankful to my virtuous soul.
Beguiling you with my beauty,
I hold you breathless.
It is my mind classy,
Her simplicity and her down to earth demeanor made her an Enchantress.
P.S. This is for You. Have I done justice to reflect what you are? I think No. What do you think?
Enchantress
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Saturday, February 04, 2012
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Ooh interesting poem. Must be for an interesting subject. Also, I really really like the photo at the top. :)
ReplyDeleteThat was WOW!
ReplyDeleteinteresting :)
ReplyDeleteyou seemed to be bowled over with killing looks n beauty..
I can blame you ;p
nyways nice loved all the highlights !
Interesting :)
ReplyDeleteThe enchantress has surely swept you off your feet! Very beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteOh wow this was nice!! :)
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