She asked me, "What do I need today, tomorrow and forever?"
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Specks of white, waiting to be colored,
Eager to be erased, dark flecks rife.
All that I have is words,
To solve the crossword of life.
Myriad thoughts, varying themes,
Every night sets them alight.
All that I have is dreams,
To paint a canvas called life.
Miles to go before you sleep,
All that you have is courage deep.
I wish to be your companion forever,
In this life, our endeavor.
Brimming with aspirations much.
Seeking for a finishing touch.
All that you have in me is trust,
I'l gladly oblige, my lady august.
With blessings from God above,
You are my essence.
All that I have is love,
To fulfill our existence.
Lots to do in this journey small,
Keeping me afloat, avoiding my fall.
Someone gives me strength anew,
All that I need is You.
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| All That I Need is You |
P.S. Unknown You, Unknown Me.
All That I Need
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Rating:
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Rating:
Talented poetry as always and you are having the right rythm in it.You seems to have found the right metaphors as well.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poems.. lovely lovely thoughts :D
ReplyDeleteI loved the rhymes. Good job!
ReplyDeleteMost times i read a poem twice, when its too profound. But this time, i read it twice, just to soak in THAT feeling of reading it.
ReplyDeleteIts awesome:)
I especially like "Miles to go before you sleep / all you have is courage deep". So true. Humans are amazingly brave.
ReplyDeleteI feel this echoing with Robert Frost... wonderful
ReplyDeleteRich with blessings...
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Beautifully done :)
ReplyDeleteI like your use of repetitions.
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