Glittering Diamond, Priceless Pearl,
Shining in the dark night.
My scintillating star, My girl,
You showcased your might.
A radiant beacon bright,
Your elegance ripped through the night.
I earned to lose in your sight,
With you .. my passion does ignite.
I missed you hopelessly,
Without you, I was lonely.
What's special abouy you missy?
It's your halo - jazzy and glitzy.
You enthrall me, my siren,
Enamor me beyond my senses.
You are my addiction,
You are My Princess.
My Princess |
My Princess
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Wednesday, October 05, 2011
Rating:
Beautiful...Each word is showing love...:)
ReplyDeleteSaru
Well Written .... itz a beauty
ReplyDeleteThank You Saru and 3rd Eye. Glad you liked it!!
ReplyDeletethe way u express ur thoughts are really wonderful!
ReplyDeletei would like to give some feedback if u dont mind :P why dont u try in different topics it will be fabulous for sure! :)
anyways keep writing & smiling always! :)
Thanks you Sowmya for your motivation.
ReplyDeleteI have tried some different poems too. :) Have a look sometime!! Hope you like it.