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Lustrous and bright, A Morning Sun,
My heart misses a beat while you paint the horizon.
You promise to color my day bright,
You always set my dreams alight.
For a split second, our eyes would meet,
Escape again quickly, our desires we cheat.
In your absence, my heart missed a beat,
Your presence would make my life complete.
Hey lovely beauty, glorious and bright,
Into your dreams, I wish you could invite.
Moments with you would be full of delight,
My humble wish is to be your knight.
Brimming with grace, is your beauty elegant,
Growing is my fondess, fiery and ardent.
Fluttering my feelings, is your stunning magic,
Attracting me strongly, is your beauty mystic.
You lure my thoughts, mercilessly incite,
We could fly the sky, father than a kite.
By God's grace we could possibly unite,
Wouldn't we color our life white?
On a night, cold and dark,
The journey of our life, we could embark.
Color our lives with a million rainbows,
My lovely lady, My Morning Rose.
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| My Morning Rose |
P.S. I just wish you could know that you are my Morning Rose. I wish you could be more than my Morning Rose.
My Morning Rose
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Friday, November 11, 2011
Rating:
Reviewed by Vyankatesh
on
Friday, November 11, 2011
Rating:
heartfelt outpourings!
ReplyDeleteVery romantic :) I like it!
ReplyDeleteLeo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Lovely poem. Heart touching!
ReplyDeleteYou should publish your love ballads Venkatesh..Just in case you wish, there is a site called cupidspeaks.com where you can upload your poems for greater readership.
ReplyDeleteThanks All. Glad you loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Alka for the link. I will try to check it out. :)
I agree with Alka..
ReplyDeleteu write fantastically when it comes to love n associated feelings :)